Actions End Undone Poem by ONElia AVElar

Actions End Undone

Rating: 2.5


Words leave paper
actions end undone
like raw crabs
leaving my plate one by one
I watch them smiling
vegetating happily
cause I am...
a sated vegetarian...

Sunday, June 27, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: vegetarian
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 03 January 2013

Not such happy crabs if they landed on my plate! Love your work x

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Original Unknown Girl 02 July 2010

The metaphors work so well in this poem dear One, I'm liking it. As always your poems have great power via their brevity. HG: -) xx

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Joseph Poewhit 27 June 2010

I bet those crabs are smiling

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