Captain Cur

Rookie - 423 Points (England)

Adagio, Love Poems - Poem by Captain Cur

Your hair draping down
the side of your face
established before my eyes
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Comments about Adagio, Love Poems by Captain Cur

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (5/12/2016 1:57:00 AM)

    I painted that image in my mind
    and molded it into my median,
    words.
    Now I want to relive it,
    again and again. - -Art beyond my experience..... a lovely poem creating desire in the intellect of the reader. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Ken E Hall (10/24/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    You certainly painted her in words to never forget a great poem of the female aurora crafted with skill lovely...regards (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (7/10/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    The last lines now I want to relive it
    again and again says it all. Pictures of
    her lush beauty was imposed upon your
    mind and emotions. Whenever you want to
    see her again all you had to do was
    imagine, imagine and imagine..............!
    Really good Captain. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde Yash Shinde (10/22/2012 8:02:00 AM)

    great imagery...........................a masterpiece...................you did the work whivh vinci did by drawing monalisa...........its beauty spills out from your potrait.loved it (Report) Reply

  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/8/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    Captain, the imaginations and images in this poem can be framed. I rate this piece of art a 10. Thanks for the comments on My Universe. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (9/8/2012 3:53:00 AM)

    You have drawn a beautiful portrait of a female figure whose enticing beauty spills out of the frame! ! Great! ! (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Mazumdar Amitava Mazumdar (9/7/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    it tells how female could be a plaited formation of imagination, great cur. (Report) Reply

  • The Reader The Reader (9/3/2012 1:34:00 PM)

    This one is also a portrait poem, i think! a master-piece on ur credit...
    words -are at ur disposal, set...brick by brick...happy to know your poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Anderson (9/1/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    You loving, perhaps lustful Capt. I'M heading to sea to see what inspired your fine poetry.
    Your poems are like paintings (Report) Reply








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