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Captain Cur

Rookie - 321 Points (England)

Adagio, love poems


Your hair draping down
the side of your face
established before my eyes
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  • Freshman - 1,219 Points Ken E Hall (10/24/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    You certainly painted her in words to never forget a great poem of the female aurora crafted with skill lovely...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (7/10/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    The last lines now I want to relive it
    again and again says it all. Pictures of
    her lush beauty was imposed upon your
    mind and emotions. Whenever you want to
    see her again all you had to do was
    imagine, imagine and imagine..............!
    Really good Captain. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Yash Shinde (10/22/2012 8:02:00 AM)

    great imagery...........................a masterpiece...................you did the work whivh vinci did by drawing monalisa...........its beauty spills out from your potrait.loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 261 Points Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/8/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    Captain, the imaginations and images in this poem can be framed. I rate this piece of art a 10. Thanks for the comments on My Universe. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,205 Points Valsa George (9/8/2012 3:53:00 AM)

    You have drawn a beautiful portrait of a female figure whose enticing beauty spills out of the frame! ! Great! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Reader (9/3/2012 1:34:00 PM)

    This one is also a portrait poem, i think! a master-piece on ur credit...
    words -are at ur disposal, set...brick by brick...happy to know your poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Joseph Anderson (9/1/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    You loving, perhaps lustful Capt. I'M heading to sea to see what inspired your fine poetry.
    Your poems are like paintings (Report) Reply

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