Godfrey Rust

Rookie - 0 Points (London, England)

Adam - Poem by Godfrey Rust

it wasn't me

it was that woman
she doesn't know what's good for her
she did it

and then
it was that snake
horrible slimy snake
I wouldn't have believed a word
I wouldn't have been taken in
imagine a talking snake
well I ask you

and then
and then
it was you
you made Eve
you made the serpent
it's your rotten apple
you knew all about it—
I was miles away
doing the garden like I was told

you're the one
you did it
it wasn't me
it wasn't me

and anyway I only took a little bite

Comments about Adam by Godfrey Rust

  • Rookie - 423 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (2/25/2012 5:17:00 PM)

    A moment of damnation, even questioning God, is well pictured.Was it not Adam's infatuation to Eve made him to bite the apple? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (4/19/2009 3:50:00 AM)

    Yo man,
    Check out the first three letters of your name....Gotcha! ! ! Guilty as hell!

    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (11/16/2008 7:27:00 AM)

    Delicious and devilish subtle...! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, January 6, 2012

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