Adaptation Poem by Mehreen Mujeeb

Adaptation



The burning metallic flames
Blackened me with pain
My scream couldn’t save me
Through my blood fire trained.

The metals sublimed
And travelled into my bones
The pain was so much
And my tears were so dry.

The burning acupunctured every cell
In the suffering I dissolved
I could no longer feel
No longer cry.

If I were to exist
In hell for eternity
The burning fire
Would no longer cause me pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niamat Ali Murtazai 03 March 2012

The burning metallic flames' the single line is a representative of the whole present age. v nice

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Afzal Shauq 27 October 2009

The burning acupunctured every cell In the suffering I dissolved I could no longer feel No longer cry. good and realisic way written..impressive one..10/10

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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