Addict's Cry 2of2 Poem by wallace eaton

Addict's Cry 2of2

Rating: 5.0


Watery eyes display the after effects of a chemically infested disease that capture all possibilities of a endless death.Have I again placed my trust in a powdery substance which throughout time has haunted the mental, mentality of every human race, tall or short, black and white. Years of emotional abuse brought forth a mental pain that boils the inner depth of a lost male character, once again resulting back to his childhood.Hoping to shield the burden of adulthood which forces him to succeed, into success, but self pitty became a way to denie what reality has always shown me through a reflecting mirror, that I'm lost, mentally. So the challenge is not with the world, but truely within himself as he rebuilds his character so that he will be acknowledge without flaws.Do he not know he is a produce of mistakes or will he ever agree with the concept of self inflicted pain, which creates sunshine from rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nora Eason 25 July 2008

you had some misspelled some words, but other than that it was good.I give you a vote of 10

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