Addiction Poem by Randy Bullocks

Addiction

Rating: 5.0


But if you where music I would play you loud so everyone would know how much I'm feeling you..if you were weed I'd smoke you to kept me high off the ground..if you where cocaine I'd sniff you to be off the earth only with you..even if you were heroin I'd shot you up my arm so you can be closer to my heart..if you were a beat machine I would hook you up to my heart so it can have rythm..if you were poetry I would read you to keep you in my thoughts.. because its you that I want to love and be addicted too..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meadow Johnson 02 July 2019

Loved it It describes how falling in love feels.

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 March 2008

Mr. Bullocks this was a bit of a surprise I must admit. I had read a couple of your writings and I was not being given much. But this piece was not only creative, it was well constructed and executed expertly. I wish more pieces came out of the blue as it were, but they just don't. I want to thank you for this. I gave it a 10 and I intend to reserve it on my list of favorites. You really will never know how rare this is unless you reaed my rhythm and rhyme poetry.I won't suggest any in particular, because I'm sure that whatever poem you choose will be a surprise for you as well. Happy Easter! GW62

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Randy Bullocks

Randy Bullocks

Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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