Adhura Pyar - Half Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Adhura Pyar - Half Love

Rating: 5.0

Unhe kadr kahan hamare pray ki
Hamein fursat kahan is baat ki
Ke hum unhe yakeen dilate
Ki wo kya hain hamare
Ye jaan paate
Bus reh gaya
Yeh banke
Ek afsana
Adhure
Pyar
ka

Saturday, January 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: half,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Half Love

She did not understand my true love
I did not express my true feelings
as to what she is to me in life
she did not open up to me
nor I did tell her
and it remained
unexpressed
half love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Imtiyaz 23 January 2016

very beautiful expression of sentiments....every one of the three love stories has this fate....

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Abhilasha Bhatt 23 January 2016

Umra kam hoti hai adhure pyar ki Shuru se shuru karo to banegi kahani mukammal pyar ki....... bahut acchi ghazal hai....loved it....thank you for sharing :)

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 January 2016

Humaari adhoori kahaani.... we all have an incomplete love in our life. well expressed.10

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Suzon Albert 25 February 2019

Adha hai chandrama raat aadhi aur reh gayi hamari kahani aadhi

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

extraordinary skills, creative work of Asim....Superb.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 26 January 2016

Romantic love is never complete that's we live with it in all our life. Thank you for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 January 2016

True love is not understood is so sad. This well structured wisely drafted poem definitely. Interesting.10

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Souren Mondal 24 January 2016

Simply incredible Asim! The manner in which each line becomes smaller is a wonderful act. I love this poem from you. Pyaar adhura rahe to dard ho ta hai, par adhura pyaar bhi to pyaar hi hota hai.. Sukhriya :)

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