Unhe kadr kahan hamare pray ki
Hamein fursat kahan is baat ki
Ke hum unhe yakeen dilate
Ki wo kya hain hamare
Ye jaan paate
Bus reh gaya
Yeh banke
Ek afsana
Adhure
Pyar
ka
Umra kam hoti hai adhure pyar ki Shuru se shuru karo to banegi kahani mukammal pyar ki....... bahut acchi ghazal hai....loved it....thank you for sharing :)
Humaari adhoori kahaani.... we all have an incomplete love in our life. well expressed.10
Adha hai chandrama raat aadhi aur reh gayi hamari kahani aadhi
Romantic love is never complete that's we live with it in all our life. Thank you for sharing.
True love is not understood is so sad. This well structured wisely drafted poem definitely. Interesting.10
Simply incredible Asim! The manner in which each line becomes smaller is a wonderful act. I love this poem from you. Pyaar adhura rahe to dard ho ta hai, par adhura pyaar bhi to pyaar hi hota hai.. Sukhriya :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very beautiful expression of sentiments....every one of the three love stories has this fate....