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Marieta Maglas
(11/19/2009 5:31:00 PM) |
The hunting seasons will intensify their intrigues
excellent meditative poem
10+++++++++++
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Summer Heat
(6/11/2009 2:03:00 PM) |
this a great work of art sir. your poem starts on a gentle and beautiful note. the gentleness is maintained throughout. however, by and by the contrast of beauty and disaster is prominent...fantastic write!
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Shashendra Amalshan
(5/29/2009 11:38:00 PM) |
yeah Naseer nice fare well song for birds who migrate...humans are murderous hunters who tarnish the beauty of this world..lets spread the words of love and bring back the beauty of the past days.....10+++
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nothing over
(4/27/2009 12:39:00 AM) |
great poem...the most intelligent creature on earth and humans are destroying the planet
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Isaac Lyman
(4/21/2009 1:27:00 PM) |
This is a beautiful piece of green poetry. I would have to reach further than I would like in order to find some criticism on this piece; so I will leave it untouched. Great job.
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Mark Slaughter
(3/7/2009 6:31:00 AM) |
A sad irony - in fact bitter-sweet. What Man does to his world! Another great poem.
Mark
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Vaibhav Pandey
(3/3/2009 8:33:00 AM) |
great piece sir....really you hit bulls eye with this one.....the last stanza tells the situation perfectly....
10 alll the way
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Catrina Heart
(2/9/2009 5:51:00 AM) |
While reading this poem it made me wonder what life of an immigrant birds are. They fly across the ocean, thousands of miles to look for a better place they could find for temporary shelter. In a school of birds they work fly in unison giving some great message to us humans, only if we are aware of.......nice imagery used. beautiful penned out..10
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