Adios Poem by Juneil Sechico

Adios

Rating: 4.5


Tell me you won't cry
If I have to say goodbye
Keep your hanky dry

I wish I'm at home
To see my flower that blooms
Read a book of poems

Count my days had past
'Cause this day would be my last
I'll turn into dust

Thank you friends of mine
For showing your love in kind
Like a gold that shines

At last I am free!
From the weights they gave to me
That keep choking me

Folks, please shed no tears
Smile with a teeth of pearls
My pain is over

Folks, see you later
Hope we'll see each other there
In a place so fair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i like it. the extended senryu.. great

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

Hey Juneil you're too young to contemplate your mortality. Enjoy your youth. Good day.

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Ben Gieske 12 January 2009

Sentiments we all feel and can identify with in some way. Solitude, to be free, gratitude, beholding beautiful things, reading good poems. You chose an interesting way to present all of these.

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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