Admit My Love Poem by sekharan pookkat

Admit My Love

Rating: 5.0


Words condensed as ice
and stiff as a piece of log
but it can be shaped
into a beautiful sculpture
of an ever green statue
buried in a broken heart
filled with love
ever than before.
Some courses
Some appreciates
And Venus smiles
And admit my love.

Tuesday, July 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True friends keep friendship for ever
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 July 2015

Deep envision. Beautifully composed. Enjoyed. TFS.

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Hazel Durham 09 July 2015

Original with inspired lines that blossom into a beautiful friendship!

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Bharati Nayak 08 July 2015

The deep feelings finds expressions in the shape of a beautiful piece of art which has a permanence of value.

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 July 2015

thanks for your comment

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