Adobe Feelings 01 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Adobe Feelings 01



Golden butterflies flying
Winter searching dreamy rose
Cool rainbow feelings

Midnight winter midst
Nocturnal birds crying around
Diary crawl under ribs

Winter smiles at night
Cuckoos consultation meeting
Spring sprouts on time-calyx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 12 July 2009

very vivid imagery and nature is so lovingly observed

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 12 July 2009

Nice piece sir, Very well imaginations, Express well intimacy of a poet to the nature...

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 July 2009

very beautiful sight...beautiful imaginations beautiful pictures in every verses.. i love the lines 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Priyanka Bhowmick 12 July 2009

a natural piece... beautiful n njoyed reading...

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Golden butterflies flying Winter searching dreamy rose Cool rainbow feelings...... so oneness with nature and its sorrounding... conceptual melody with powerful thoughts.. i admired it.....10 read mine...slippery ground and serious thoughts.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 26 July 2009

This poem is attesting to imagination of the great format - of course, of imagination of the Poet. Excellent painted images word and competently selected of them 'colours' they cause that the poem is becoming magic and it attracts and charm. Very much I like it and certainly it is deserving the highest note. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Dagmara Anna 26 July 2009

Very interesting written.I like it DA

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 July 2009

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hi ASHRAFUL...how are you friend..enjoyed this warm poem..is this the case of us all suddenly we will go...see you again..best wishes..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 July 2009

how stylish the construction is! shan

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