Adventures Of Two Captains, Part 9 Poem by Captain Cur

Adventures Of Two Captains, Part 9

Rating: 5.0


As we both receive attack,
Captain Cur remembered his old friend, Lord Black

He was the Leader of Ysa Lands,
Great and powerful with generous hands

Once Captain Cur helped him in a war
And he was loyal to our Captain for the Par

As a noble man and a great warrior,
He received our message, so he managed his carrier

The whole army of Ysa was going for a war,
Among their magnificent spaceship named Green Star

IN ASHLANDS:

I was still in the dreams of an unknown place
While out of my mind a terrific war was going on,
That monster was the Queen of that satanic base

Ray of light splashed in the air, I opened my eyes
Captain Cur was fighting while he was defending me,
The red dirty sky of Ashlands broke with the hope's sign

Then the Green Star shined like a moon
Captain pointed at that phenomenon, said:
Ellias, wake! From now this monster is a goon!

Written by Ellias Anderson
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 21 June 2013

Always loved work from my beloved two, two of you...great work must always to continue again and again...i feel early structure more Ellias but then guided by Captain cur and blend well as a great lovely write_SOul

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David Wood 22 June 2013

This was a really god read. I enjoyed it so much I read it twice. Lovely.

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Wahab Abdul 23 June 2013

two mind together! excellent i read it with joy...

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Doug Bentley 29 January 2014

With scientific sorcery you skipper afar, but our boat's beached. we paddle back to shore. o lord of the seven seas, what treasures of wonder beckon you now? we watchmen wait for sight of your proud sails. we watch. we wait. we wait.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 December 2013

Where are you valor captain.... our Adventures and all the people here miss you so much. your student captain A

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Poetheart Morgan 11 November 2013

I enjoyed so much Poet an excellent write! ! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

lovely work with two minds as a one...

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Patricia Grantham 23 June 2013

Very nice poem of two Captains. As the say goes two heads are better than one. Love this write.

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