Captain Cur

Rookie - 415 Points (England)

Adventures Of Two Captains To The Heart Of Galaxy, Part 3 - Poem by Captain Cur

Near the gates of an unknown place we stopped
The smell of darkness was everywhere like a satanic smoke.

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

These stories are being written by myself and my good friend
Ellias Anderson. Please visit his page for the continuation
of our adventures.

Comments about Adventures Of Two Captains To The Heart Of Galaxy, Part 3 by Captain Cur

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/13/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    the narration in poetical way absorbed me.
    what then?
    ~nb (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (4/9/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    A fast-paced cliff-hanger, but don't call him a hero, it'll go to his head. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (4/7/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    Hahahaha i laughed when two captains each other calling themselves as captain..i enjoyed this adventure, i need a shine from a start to heal my stye on my blunt left eyes to see...it seems captain has show me some a way by a precious constellation that he seen through years of this journey in milkaway seas_Soul (Report) Reply








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