Affinity And Me Poem by shimon weinroth

Affinity And Me

Rating: 4.5


Getting up at dawn
Before the birds
And sunbeams yawn
I walk the path

A barefoot lawn
Tickles the fancy
Just to muse and gaze
Let the glances jump about

As a ball
Or floating clouds
Or winging birds
A mist about to bid adieu

Traces embraced with dew
Sweet aroma of fresh and renew
Bring giddy senses to the mind
Touch and strum the memory chords

Fill the well to swell
From the brim
Bursting out
In smile and song

Music and symphony
Thoughts sublime
I walk tall
With gods and heroes

Into my world
Of at the dawn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 18 September 2006

A wonderful welcome to the morning! This poem shines with its own light, Shimon. Regards, Sandra

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Steve Hagget 18 September 2006

well controlled imagery and really good use of language, Steve

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

Excellent poem, Shimon! What a wonderful use of sensory language!

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