Karley Kay

Rookie (6/22 / Found My Relief)

Afraid Again


Hating this feeling, what's this mean?
My chest hurts, I can't breathe
My eyes burn, tears stain my face
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  • Rookie Victoria Meza (4/15/2014 8:06:00 PM)

    Love love LOVE this! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathryn Mahan (3/17/2014 11:38:00 AM)

    This was nicely handled Karley. I know exactly how you feel... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allan Farran (3/16/2014 8:13:00 AM)

    Really good your angst being lay out before mine eyes. never let the past determine the future. The past is the past (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Oxley (3/16/2014 4:44:00 AM)

    a lovely poem full of emotion and true feeling. Well done Karley. Sometimes I think writing poetry at its best is for dissipating strong feeling into the Universe. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christine Still (3/15/2014 2:18:00 AM)

    Learn the difference between 'they're', their and there. What you wanted was They're just guys.... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 866 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/16/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    unhappy experiences in the past do tend to mar our present, but with time I am sure you would be okay... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shay Pugh (3/16/2012 1:19:00 AM)

    Good poem! I like the rhythm of it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (1/25/2012 4:24:00 PM)

    It's a very complex-minded poem! ! ! there is a essence of contradiction about the poem but yet your poetry is direct and strong! ! (Report) Reply

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