Dangerously Normal Spoonie

Rookie - 10 Points (6/22 / Anywhere With You)

Afraid Again - Poem by Dangerously Normal Spoonie

Hating this feeling, what's this mean?
My chest hurts, I can't breathe
My eyes burn, tears stain my face
........................
........................
read full text »


Comments about Afraid Again by Dangerously Normal Spoonie

  • Victoria Meza (4/15/2014 8:06:00 PM)


    Love love LOVE this! ! (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kathryn Mahan (3/17/2014 11:38:00 AM)


    This was nicely handled Karley. I know exactly how you feel... (Report) Reply

  • Allan Farran (3/16/2014 8:13:00 AM)


    Really good your angst being lay out before mine eyes. never let the past determine the future. The past is the past (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2014 4:44:00 AM)


    a lovely poem full of emotion and true feeling. Well done Karley. Sometimes I think writing poetry at its best is for dissipating strong feeling into the Universe. (Report) Reply

  • (3/15/2014 2:18:00 AM)


    Learn the difference between 'they're', their and there. What you wanted was They're just guys.... (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (3/16/2012 7:58:00 AM)


    unhappy experiences in the past do tend to mar our present, but with time I am sure you would be okay... (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2012 1:19:00 AM)


    Good poem! I like the rhythm of it! (Report) Reply

  • (1/25/2012 4:24:00 PM)


    It's a very complex-minded poem! ! ! there is a essence of contradiction about the poem but yet your poetry is direct and strong! ! (Report) Reply








[Report Error]