Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 17,214 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

After Tears.... [food To Make Me Feel Good; Very Short; Humor] - Poem by Bri Edwards

After tears and things depressing,
give me turkey, peas, and lots of dressing.
Pile high the cornbread with lots of butter,
till my belly's full and my heart does flutter.

(April 19,2014)

Topic(s) of this poem: food

Poet's Notes about The Poem

the following poem on PH lead me to write my poem.:


Blue is a good color to wear some times
And then to leave it behind these lines
They will help us to recall
Some do not have phones at all
For 'rude messages' to store;
while some need some, some want more.
After tears and things depressing,
Lets give thanks for every blessing.
Charles Monroe'
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i 'found' 'charles monroe' when he left a message at a poem by nika mcguin. i think that is the proper story of what happened! bri :)

Comments about After Tears.... [food To Make Me Feel Good; Very Short; Humor] by Bri Edwards

  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (5/13/2014 2:16:00 AM)

    Nice one bri c (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,381 Points Eugene Levich (5/3/2014 7:18:00 PM)

    ????? Britches,
    ??? ??????? ??? ????? ???? ??????? ????? ??????. ??? ? ??? ??? ???? ????, ?? ??? ?????? ????? ???? ????? ???? ???! ????? ???,
    Translation below:
    Dear Britches,
    I decided to write to you in Gujarati. If you continue to eat like this you won't be able to fit into yours!
    Your Pal,
    Gino (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,849 Points John Westlake (4/22/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    Comfort food in turkey? ? Fair enough. I'd go with that just no dressing or corn bread for me thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (4/21/2014 4:35:00 AM)

    It doesn't matter how you feel, there's always comfort in a meal. It it is what we do like then it is added delight. If it is just to sustain, nothing ventured, nothing gained, and yet a stomach a little taut knows its sated as a great retort and sucour is its true reward. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,494 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/19/2014 11:45:00 PM)

    That's the beauty of God you are doubtful about, He has made a system and laws, physical and biological, man suffers by one hand and avenged by the other. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 19, 2014

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