After Your Leaving... Poem by hazem al jaber

After Your Leaving...

Rating: 2.7


the sky without stars...
and the moon so dark...
the day without lights...
the summer so cold...
the body without heart....
and the blood static....

flowers changed as a rocks..
and spring to an autumn..
and a happiness to a sadness...
and a peace to afraidness...

after your leaving, , my beloved..
i can`t find a meaning to my life..
all my days became lost..
a future became past..
and the past only hurts and pains...
pains are from you...
and a wound to my heart...
so please, take carefull about heart loved you...
didn`t wish any thing from his god, ...
only a life or a death near you...

are you going to be near to me...? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kayla Garcia 22 March 2006

i really like this poem it's really beautiful. ^_^

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Nasra Al Adawi 25 March 2006

take carefull about heart loved you... I think you should put as take carefull about a heart loved you... Good poem though and loved the voice of pain for loosing their beloved

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Jolanta Gradowicz 06 May 2006

I could feel the real pain - this poem is very vivid.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

lovely piece, Hazem...a paining heart sad, always turns eloquent...i especially liked your over weighing expression- 'a future became past'...thanks...10

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Sandy Jensen 13 February 2007

what a lovely poem...i can relate very much...my body was numb for many months after i seperated from my ex partner...my body was wracked with grief...i lay curled up like a little big baby and wept night after night...it was the most horrific pain...but i have survived...and i am getting stronger...admitedly im still a little numb...still early days....

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Nouri Black 05 February 2007

ooooooooooo i love it so much...and u know i really enjoy it so much

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Felicia Fortine 10 December 2006

I think this is a very good poem i enjoy reading your poetry your very talented i hope you have a great week *Felicia*

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Suzan Gumush 27 November 2006

Pain brings strength you never knew that existed within you. Good but sad verse. Love and best wishes suzan

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