Aghast Poem by Little Star

Aghast

Rating: 5.0


Things didn’t work out right
As I thought they should be
I woke up feeling good
And was excited to see you again today

But what a heck had happened
You left me in the middle of our conversation
You logged off, as if banging up the door behind me
I was bewildered, aghast, feeling dismayed

No words but tears speaking silently
As they flowed down my cheeks
My heart crushed like lemonade
The pain engulfed me like dragon’s teeth

I kept looking at the door
Hoping it would open and I’d see you again
The clock turning the minutes into hours
The morning into night, you’re nowhere in sight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marian Rosal 10 September 2009

Really bad but don't ruin the good day when things go off someplace. It is just a matter of your sensitivity. is a ten from me.

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Little Star

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Cebu City, Philippines
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