Ah...Anu...Mon Amour! Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Ah...Anu...Mon Amour!

Rating: 5.0


It is night
on the Artic Circle.

The Aura Borealis
is entertaining a Finnish sky.

Inside – us two
(cuddled into an US)

observe the late night
flickering film

that will take us through to
the early morning.

I am at a loss
as it is

HIROSHIMA MON AMOUR

in French
(which I do not speak)

subtitled into Finnish
(which I cannot read) .

Words fail me.

Soft as a snowflake
falls gently

you rescue me
whisper the words of the lovers

translating their love
into our love

Oh love..!

You words caress me

and I understand
completely

not just
how much

You really love me

but how much

I really really love you.

Somewhere in the hours
of time

the film finishes
and becomes only static & snow. . .static & snow.

Somewhere a dawn finds us
in a tangle of limbs & dreams. . .limbs & dreams

asleep
in one another’s heads.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Pisapia 02 August 2007

Tender, touching and oh so lovely! You write like a caresse...a kiss...if it could be transposed into words. The way you take the details of your life and arrange them into so fragile a story and so beautifull a pattern takes my breath away. Your poem is like frost on a window pane and then you've gone and written her name on it and we can see the love so tenderely expressed. A poem any wife would be proud of...it's so beautiful. The inexpressible...expressed so magically. GianXXX

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alice sunderland 03 May 2007

class act dd! got to read them all now.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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