Ah Me! Poem by Rimni chakravarty

Ah Me!

Rating: 4.3


Since four decades I am here,
At times I smile giggle and even shed a drop of tear
Since four decades I feed on the grains
And enjoy the lilting music of the rains.

Now I had no idea of the life a lady who spent two scores
She had refused to spend life in the same daily chores
She was ambitious to set her a mark on her own
And was confident to travel alone
In the journey of life
She was fine,
And enjoyed to accept the challenges life offered her
She was sure to reach afar
Age was no bar.

But society had something else to say
For the society women are dolls of clay
Who must be married to win the title of a wife and mother
Or else there is something wrong with her?

At forty she becomes a topic of discussion
Where society pays full concentration
To pass judgements on her
And even declares a dirty war
To malign her character.

The lady understands no friends only foes
This is how life goes
No problem, let me play my game.

Ah! me

Tuesday, October 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: society
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the story is of a single woman who maintains her dignity amidst criticism.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2014

Such an impressive poem that touched my heart. I liked your confidence and I salute you.

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2014

A very bold but caustic commentary on the status of women, and unmarried women in particular. Eye-opening. A slap on the face of our hypocrite society. Thanks, please.

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Sudipta Bhattacharyya 01 June 2015

Stark realistic composition ! True depiction of our so-called modern society ! Wonderful ! Thanks for sharing !

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Kishore Kumar Das 08 April 2016

the presence of so many poets and their verses should provide you with the energy to live! pent up emotions beautifully scripted by you..

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 February 2017

Single woman. Let me play my game! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rounak Shaw 24 April 2021

I literally got emotional and a sigh of pounding is what I felt while walking through this poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 June 2018

March ahead and play all your wishful game on the stage of welfare being for everyone within your strength wow nice 10+++

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BRITTE NINAD 15 May 2018

From the title 'Ah me' to 'No problem, let me play my game' full expression are in sanguine... nicely described

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Jeanette Telusma 08 April 2017

Ah Me... I'm at this point in my life and realizing life starts now. Lovely poem.

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2017

Lovely narrative poem elegantly brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rimni.

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