Air Born Poem by Christine Austin Cole

Air Born

Rating: 4.3


She tumbled from the sky that night
White washed and too familiar
Holding cotton candy dreams
In her hand
Timidly, she set down
And begged the earth
To take her in
Even then
Her heart just wouldn’t
Let go
The sky

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(She could still hear the echoes
Apple pie lies and emptiness
Hopeless, she couldn't bear to listen)
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She convinced herself not to cry
Wanted but unacceptable now
Rejecting the memories that
Lingered behind
She smiled, as the night
Breathed her in
Just when
A single stubborn tear
Fell from
Her eye


And I....
I wasn't brave enough to ask her why.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 03 August 2008

Not being brave enough to ask why is what most of us humans succumb to, because we are not ready for those answers. Good writing. arya

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Christine 23 June 2022

I tend to think that it is rather that we do not know we are ready, not that we aren't. In fact, I'd argue that we're probably long overdue.

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Raynette Eitel 29 May 2005

OH my goodness...'apple pie and loneliness.' What an image to tug at the heartstrings. This has the exact dream quality that I love. You are such a poet. Raynette

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Colin J... 18 May 2008

Clouds of loneliness... Beautiful... Colin J...

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Robert Howard 18 May 2008

She begged the world to take her in and it did. Now that's worth smiling about! Victorious!

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Ramesh Rai 13 February 2012

She smiled, as the night Breathed her in Just when A single stubborn tear Fell from Her eye xlent write. top marks.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 December 2009

Just when A single stubborn tear Fell from Her eye................................................oh what a stunning metaphor that leads to redound to the gleams of light, passion when lost to riff of reason on the rune of dream, most ingenious write i always look for,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 31 May 2009

great lines...quite ashooting star you sketched there on a vast canvas....ending in a single tear superb poem cheers

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Aarif Ameen 08 April 2009

A single stubborn tear Fell from Her eye 10 good luck

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C. P. Sharma 27 November 2008

...a weaving of superb imagery, noble thoughts and a sympathetic heart. A beautiful poem.

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