Alive Poem by ellery lim

Alive

Rating: 5.0


Thankful I’m alive
Living, though in strive
Nervous yet confident
Made very evident

I stare with disbelief
There are others worse than me
I tell you I was shocked
How such men were being mocked
I sympathised with them
After all, my face they mirrored
Now I’m a different man
As though I was god send

I’m still alive
Happy to be
Living this life
For all to see

But still I see my past
Even though it passed so fast
I see that weakling face of mine
Begging for food, looking for coins

But now I’m changed
Life now arranged
A formal man
With a new stand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Thankful Im alive! ! Life has so many twists and turns. It's how we overcome that matters. A truthful poem. Enjoyable read.; D

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James Grayson 01 March 2010

I like this one, its nice to see someone grateful for their life and showing appriciation. Very well writen, with a nice ryming flow to it. Well done

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