kriti krits

Rookie (24th July 1981 / Mauritius)

All Around - Poem by kriti krits

My nights turned into blanksheets
My breath filled with unwanted fits
My being covered with sad shades
All around, After a while,
Nothing worked,
Not even a smile

My heart beats no more
My senses wave no more
My Self lives no more
All around, After a while
Nothing worked,
Not even a smile

The turn was last
The moment was dusk
He no more formed the cast
And left me as a past
All around, after a while
Nothing worked,
Not even a smile

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 29, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, November 18, 2005

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