Brittney Pennington

Rookie - 129 Points (19/12/1991 / Crourd 'd lane)

All I Want - Poem by Brittney Pennington

your hands bushes over mine
your eyes capture my soul
your stories entertain my mind
your smile takes my heart
your everything is all I want

Comments about All I Want by Brittney Pennington

  • Rookie - 0 Points G. Murdock (12/30/2009 5:23:00 PM)

    There's a typo in the first line which distracts from the simplistic exposition of your poem. Otherwise good. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Adens Kamwi (12/30/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    short but ever so sweet lovely (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,076 Points C. P. Sharma (12/27/2009 5:10:00 AM)

    Sublime divine love.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 3, 2010

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