Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 561 Points (Pakistan)

All Is Not Lost!


Good dreams are bad friends
Rendering reality more painful than ever
Stung by them
I suffer from my split being
The rebel self;
When words deceive
The silence offers shield to me;
I wonder why
Whenever
To sow the seeds of love
I put the dibble into the soil
The land hits me back by its hardness
It gets dried up-
My hand stops impulsively
But eyes never stop dreaming
What if
The efforts to grow love stay unresponded
Perhaps
The need to soften the soil has grown to double;
How a wish for a gentle rainfall
Makes a mockery of my desires
As the water rushes inside and floods away
The dear belongings of my heart-
The blows of despair
Try in vain
To drive away the clouds of joys
From my hope-skies,
But all is not lost
Since my eyes never stop dreaming!

Submitted: Wednesday, August 14, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 14, 2013

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  • Rookie Hina Narjis (2/5/2014 6:07:00 AM)

    Good dreams are bad friends...Rendering reality more painful than ever Suno logo meri aankhen khrido gay...Mujy ik khaab ka tawaan bharna hai..!
    When words deceive
    The silence offers shield to me;
    .
    Perhaps
    The need to soften the soil has grown to double;
    .
    But all is not lost
    Since my eyes never stop dreaming! Hope-giving beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Muhammad Ali (1/20/2014 2:09:00 PM)

    amazing poem and your skills. thanks aapi. i think i will always remember.
    'Good dreams are bad friend'. And the last line also very touchy. Very nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,198 Points Amitava Sur (1/18/2014 1:09:00 AM)

    All is not lost, because the answer is hidden in your lines itself.....
    Try in vain
    To drive away the clouds of joys ... never drive it out. So long that will remain nothing will be lost.
    very nice, keep well Shazia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (8/30/2013 1:36:00 AM)

    hope keeps us alive... dream is dream.. person can dream anytime...
    powerful thoughts! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 91 Points Robert Green (8/28/2013 3:48:00 PM)

    What if
    The efforts to grow love stay unresponded
    Perhaps
    The need to soften the soil has grown to double;
    How a wish for a gentle rainfall
    Makes a mockery of my desires
    As the water rushes inside and floods away
    The dear belongings of my heart-

    Amazing lines of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (8/28/2013 11:07:00 AM)

    yes DARE TO DREAM is something that we should all do! ! ! The way you use metaphors in your writings with such an ease is simply amazing! ! ! loved the ending

    But all is not lost
    Since my eyes never stop dreaming! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Aimanu Begum (8/28/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    This one is among those beautiful poems that have touched my heart.The poet talks of the difference of dreams from that of the hard facts of life, of hopes crushed...dreams get dashed against the rocky wall of life..yet dreams continue because the heart, the soul, stay indomitable, always hopeful.This is not the poet speaking just about her, she is speaking for us all who dare to dream.............I love you Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,003 Points Valsa George (8/18/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    'My eyes never stop dreaming.'.. this line being used like a refrain, adds a lot of brightness to the otherwise grey mindscape and gives the poem a pleasant twist towards the end and thoroughly justifies the title! The opening two lines unfold a deep philosophical thought! ! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 858 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/18/2013 8:52:00 AM)

    Love grows best in the soil of a heart
    One does not need a dibble to plant it's seeds
    The heart just opens up and accepts the the seed
    But once planted much care must be maintained
    or the seed of love withers and dies.
    Dreams are seeds too and like love are planted; in our mind,
    and need care and attention for them to come true.
    There are other seeds one can plant also. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,058 Points Ramesh Rai (8/16/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    well said. all is not lost.some thing is rest and that is the hope of life. beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 413 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/15/2013 12:38:00 AM)

    'All is not lost'
    Rain cannot stop soaking the soil
    And the sun rays will clear the frost

    Heaven will send it's pearly rewards
    A seedling will grow out of stones
    Love's labor, sweet dreams will never lost! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,792 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/14/2013 8:37:00 PM)

    Poor soul must have some dreams to compensate for the harsh realities. Everybody needs that kind of split nature to overcome hard times. Beautiful poem describes the state with clarity and purpose. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/14/2013 2:25:00 PM)

    Shahzia Ma'am, this is a wonderful write. The difference between what we dream and what we see is what we believe and what we dont. When the dream itself sustains, and floats in skies, it is difficult to believe and we circle down to what we see. It is not the wuality of the seed that matters, where you saw it does. I hope your seed of expectation grows into a plant of belief, despite whether it'll give you fruit! .

    I vote 10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,553 Points Dinesh Nair (8/14/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    We often feel down.. but we are never out.. A poem that is catagorically written across the canvas of significant concerns..A fine piece of poetry Shahziaji.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,602 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 7:40:00 AM)

    whenever to sow seeds of love I put dibble into the soil...wonderful write, Shahzia..Loved reading each lines..
    Beautiful poem with great message...
    and
    Thank you for all the lovely comments for my poems. (Report) Reply

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