All That Remains Of Me Poem by Benjamin Chiu Uy

All That Remains Of Me

Rating: 4.3


All that Remains of Me

All that remains of me
Will be nothing less of a man

If you are nothing less of a woman
Who can cuddle me and let me sleep with my tightembrace,
Who hums softly and make the nights safe from its dark moors and landings.

Who turn to be this soft human pillow to be straddled to in the night till morning

All the prevalent memories of a complete home, sanctuary and a beautiful attractive world.

Maybe if the world would suffer on a major earthwake tommorow,
We would come unscaped among the wreakages

As if nature would not provoke these scenarious,
As ifi would rather die in your arms and ignore all the possibilities of an Armagedon,

And stay calm until the last breath of air escape my fatigue body.

Fragile in the unweavering gaze of your caring eyes.
Apalpable breathing body you can still touch and kiss and thank the Gods it was a just a bad dream

A preciousremainder of how sad it will be if there was not a You

Wednesday, August 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 20 October 2018

Hi Ben, Congratulations on selection as Poet of the Day. Marvellous work Keep it up.

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Benjamin Uy 21 October 2018

gratefull for the honor kind muse, will try my best on this regard, thank you respectfully

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Benjamin Uy 21 October 2018

thank you for the honor of selecting my poem i am in great gratitude for this support, yours benjamin

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Bharati Nayak 20 October 2018

(part-2) Let me quote- - And stay calm until the last breath of air escape my fatigue body. Fragile in the unweavering gaze of your caring eyes. Apalpable breathing body you can still touch and kiss and thank the Gods it was a just a bad dream A preciousremainder of how sad it will be if there was not a You - - - - - - - - - - Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Benjamin Uy 21 October 2018

thank you poet, cant express enought gratitude for your support great honor for your comments.

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Bharati Nayak 20 October 2019

'A preciousremainder of how sad it will be if there was not a You' Love is so precious- -It is fulfilling.It is no life if there is no love. Congratulations again for this poem being chosen as the Poem of the Day!

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Tamara Beryl Latham 20 October 2019

/thoughts of passion are evidenced in your poem. Wonderfully penned. Congratulations on POD and thank you for sharing. : -)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 October 2019

CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen twice as The member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! For you, dear poet! An amazing ardent art. I have enjoyed very much. Twice won this most deserving poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 October 2019

stay calm until the last breath of air escape my fatigue body// ow the love stays peacefully here beautiful poem penned and shared

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Chan Mongol 20 October 2019

The honorable poet has written well.

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