(()) All The Fun Of The Fair Poem by Dee Wright

(()) All The Fun Of The Fair

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Eager to lose
'it'

(my family eager
to preserve
'it')

this
'precious'
virginity

as
if
'it'
were

their possession
(not mine)

as if
'I'
had nothing

to do
with
'it! '

Never seeing me
as I saw myself

the soverign
of my body

oozing with pubesent
lust and sex and yes

the day the fun
fair came
to town

I became
a bottled blonde

and flew free
from shackles
of their wishes

lost in your kisses

as the merry-
-go - round
-spun - 'round

scattering my laughter
in all directions

my virginity
melting like

candyfloss
in the mouth

as your vividily
painted purple porpoise

chased my luridly
scarlet painted dragon

me enjoying
me enjoying you enjoying me

in total abandon
all caution

thrown to

the wind...in my hair

all the fun
of fair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 14 January 2008

Great poem Dee Dee! Clever, fun and some very smart usage of the word 'it'! ! Also loved the candy floss line, imagery superb in this one. Well Done you! HG: -) xx

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David Guise 10 January 2008

holds the attention. funny, i thought virginity in the first stanza

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Scarlett Treat 08 January 2008

Well, now! What a ride! You have shown teen-age desire for freedom, the rebellion of the bottled blond...the wild abandon of the ride...Well done!

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Bill Smith 08 January 2008

ooo la la liked this, great opening lines with the use of 'it' enjoyed the read smiffy

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