All The Men: Please Don'T Ignore Your Woman Poem by elysabeth faslund

All The Men: Please Don'T Ignore Your Woman

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The man wants his way...
The man works on his sailboat...
The man works on his cars...
The man makes all decisions...
The man eats, then sleeps...
The man has no time for his woman...
The man gets his way...

His present of appreciation?
Divorce papers
Tied up in a bow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2008

This wasn't a shot across the bow, it was a direct hit. Greenwolfe 1962

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Alison Cassidy 01 August 2007

This is bitingly delivered and rich with rage. Love the shopping list style of this rant. It makes the final serve that much more powerful. When will they ever learn, eh? Perhaps it will take more than one set of divorce papers before the penny drops. In the meantime, there is an abundance of freedom in release and many more fish in the testosterone filled sea. Or so it seems to me. Great piece. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Trade Martin 30 July 2007

Greater wisdom was never spoken....., but most of us learn when it's too late....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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David Barlow 30 July 2007

Wonderful, sad Poem Elysabeth, if a little slanted, I dearly hope we are not all as bad as that. I do hope you have a loving and caring partner. Love & Hugs David x

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elysabeth faslund

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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