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Alley Talk Haiku by n./a. gaudio

12/4/2008 9:27:45 PM

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n./a. gaudio (11-19-1985 / Cumberland, Maryland)

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Alley Talk Haiku

Tom’s eyes found the sky.
Padding his wound with her scarf,
Jane said to him, “Breathe.”

n./a. gaudio

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Melai W (3/11/2007 4:04:00 AM)
Emotion depicted very well. I'm not a fan of haiku but this really strikes me. It's very touching too without being mushy with the words. Excellent.

Ivan Donn Carswell (2/4/2007 3:47:00 AM)
It ain't haiku. Traditionally that ends with a season. It might be tanka. Or it might be senryu. But who gives a shit. Its still 5 - 7 - 5 and that'll do. IDC

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