Some Girl

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Almost Empty - Poem by Some Girl

i am drowning
the tears are half empty
and the glass is half full
what is meant to be?

i look ahead
to a better day
but they all feel empty
come what may?

tomorrow sounds good
but the outcome is bleak
i wait nonetheless
am i too weak?

i force my smiles
but my mouth is mean
no matter what i write
its not in my heart it seems?

i am tired of being tired
no matter how alive i am
the emptiness is full
there is no calm.

Comments about Almost Empty by Some Girl

  • Gold Star - 10,003 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/18/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    A narration of empty feelings.
    the emptiness is full
    there is no calm.
    Well expressed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 11, 2013

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