(July 12,1952 / New York City)

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Aloha Haiku

A room with a view

warm tropical paradise

Mai Tai anyone?


Hula in the palms

the breeze sways coconut trees

waves clap a rythem

Submitted: Thursday, February 26, 2009


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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/14/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    What welcoming beautiful images. I feel like going for a holiday now. Lovely haiku Lorraine.
    10 Karin Anderson

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  • Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (3/1/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    Sweet and light. Just what one needs on this Sunday morn.

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  • Chitra - (2/27/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    the gusto of aloha and the waves of hawaiian zing...good one

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