Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,839 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Aloha Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

A room with a view

warm tropical paradise

Mai Tai anyone?

Hula in the palms

the breeze sways coconut trees

waves clap a rythem

Comments about Aloha Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/14/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    What welcoming beautiful images. I feel like going for a holiday now. Lovely haiku Lorraine.
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  • Rookie Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (3/1/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    Sweet and light. Just what one needs on this Sunday morn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (2/27/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    the gusto of aloha and the waves of hawaiian zing...good one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 26, 2009

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