Aloha Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Aloha Haiku

Rating: 4.5


A room with a view

warm tropical paradise

Mai Tai anyone?


Hula in the palms

the breeze sways coconut trees

waves clap a rythem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

What welcoming beautiful images. I feel like going for a holiday now. Lovely haiku Lorraine. 10 Karin Anderson

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 01 March 2009

Sweet and light. Just what one needs on this Sunday morn.

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Chitra - 27 February 2009

the gusto of aloha and the waves of hawaiian zing...good one

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