Alone Poem by Ruma Chaudhuri

Alone

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When I was alone
In the misty light
I walked for long
In the moonlit night

The misty light could be bright
If you were with me.
Every moments could be sunrise
In our happiness and glee.

The crescent moon
could be full
and sparkled on the sea,
Our long roads could be
Flowery and green
Only for you and me.

But as you never
Came to me
The moon became
Only crescent.
I was walking
And walking alone
Un till the roads end.

Everything was same
As before,
But nothing was
so pleasant.
I was walking alone
In the moonlit night
To reach the road's end.

Saturday, May 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2014

A very impressive poem.

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Mary Forrester 25 May 2014

Beautiful poem Ruma, enjoyed the read.

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Loaded with a loneliness that leaps and longs for love. Well done my friend!

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Khairul Ahsan 17 May 2014

A nice poem. 'Every moments could be sunrise In our happiness and glee.' - A nice expression. 'But nothing was so pleasant. I was walking alone In the moonlit night To reach the road's end.' - Sad and sombre thoughts. Leaves empathy in the readers' minds.

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Ramesh Rai 17 May 2014

Beautiful soothing write. Loved your ink.

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Dipak Adhya 05 April 2019

I was walking alone In the moonlit night To reach the road's end. Very well written.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 15 January 2019

Wonderful! Dear poetess! A beautiful poem. Lonely night sometimes, is not alone. May be a poetic boon. you may like to read my poem The Wind: An Extremd Instance

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

wonderful alone scenery described here- The moon became Only crescent. I was walking And walking alone Un till the roads end. /// beautiful poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2016

But as you never Came to me The moon became Only crescent. I was walking And walking alone Un till the roads end..........if you were with me...... it would have beennnnnn unimaginable....... such a love poem. very very nice my dear poetess. desire, wishes, unfilled........ again wish tht it will come true..... that is life. we go through life like that and die........ God bless you for this thoughtful poem. tony

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So lonely....wonder why Thais is what I am going through in this part of my life. MYbe soon I will be just alone and not lonely. Sensitive touched my heart

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