Alone Poem by Aabid Masroor
Alone
Island-in an ocean of tears
I am single, alone and my fears
Which to repair is huge painted wall
With natures gift sunlight in snowfall
Then what could death do when i depart
And when there is empty chamber of heart
Hath no fear to loose, no one to recall
Hath no pains to choose, no deserving to fall
Ask the whispering waves of breeze
Am i alone in cold days of freeze
They say I am idol of solidity
When i have kissed the forehead of difficulity
Syed Aabid Syed
Wow! Wonderful poem filled with tender and heartfelt emotion. Could feel the loneliness oozing from between each line. Really profound and aimed at the heart. I have read several of your poems, enjoying them very much. Have added you to my poet list, and given you a 10 on each of them! Thank you you for sharing. RoseAnn
Nice imagery and rhyme throughout. I enjoyed this poignant expression of your feelings.
Adventurous life! Staking everywhere, difficulty with every step! This mountain, that ocean, This valley, that urban city All are full of thorns! Everywhere is crowded But all alone in crowdedness Need the power of struggle against the difficulty Need the confidence to the crown of life
Hath no fear to loose, no one to recall Hath no pains to choose, no deserving to fall ...... I am idol of solidity When i have kissed the forehead of difficulity ......excellent poem penned... Difficulty in loneliness is nothing if there has struggle power, confidence, fearless activeness inside....congrats for being selected this poem as POD...deserves rating 5++
Ask the whispering waves of breeze Am i alone in cold days of freeze They say I am idol of solidity When i have kissed the forehead of difficulity idol of solidity forhead of difficulty great expressions my dear poet. tony
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4/24/2024 12:09:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nicely done, Aabid. Congrats on poem of the day!