Benjamin Krouskop

Rookie (Aug 29,1988 / Bellefountaine)

Alone


My breath is void of oxygen
My heart a scribble without rythm
I don't know what I'm doing
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Comments about this poem (Alone by Benjamin Krouskop )

  • Rookie Thomas Stevenson (4/30/2012 12:34:00 PM)

    This is how I feel all the time...
    Idk how much longer I can fight this lossing battle.
    I wonder why, why did I move, isnt this what I wanted? The semi was my way out, but fear took hold...
    So I'm here again wish for the bitter sweet death that'll come again... And end this lonely, painful, emptiness that is my life. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kristina Lybbert (10/25/2011 12:14:00 PM)

    This is my favorite poem.
    I first heard this poem in my third drama class in the 7th grade.
    My drama teacher told us to memorize it and since I loved this poem right away I had the whole thing memorized in less than a day and I was the only one to recite the whole poem.
    Thank you Benjamin Krouskop for writing such a great poem, you expire me to write poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angie Melby (5/27/2008 3:23:00 PM)

    your really good unfortunatly thats how i feel some times except you said it way better then i could you have real talent im jelous lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Los Lonly (12/6/2007 11:29:00 AM)

    Verry descriptive I like the line a scribble without rythem. (Report) Reply

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