Alone Poem by Rose Smith

Alone

Rating: 4.5


There is a place I go deep within my soul;
where no one else can find me
Whenever I need to be.
It is there I stay but for a little while;
with fond memories of a time gone by.
If only I had cherished those precious moments I was given
When all appeared whole and right within my home;
I wouldn’t have to feel quite so alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

Poems should be short. They should also say something that everyone uinderstands instinctively. This does both. Well done. GW62

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Bill Smith 11 April 2008

ouch! touched a nerve or two regards Smiffy

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Glaedr the poet 11 April 2008

Short, yet conveys a meaning that could be expressed in novel. Well done!

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Michael Campbell 11 April 2008

we all have that spot. very personal and well put. regret is difficult. thank you.

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Rose Smith

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