Alone Poem by Elphaba Thropp

Alone

Rating: 5.0


I am alone.
Nobody here beside me.
My friends all ignore me,
I am alone.

When I try to talk to them
They don't listen.
Give me the cold shoulder.

When will they notice what they do?
When will they care?
Will they ever?
No.

I am alone.
They don't care.
Nobody does.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Mollindo 11 January 2006

You poor poor child. I hope you feel better now. My Best Wishes, Amanda

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Ivy Schex 30 November 2005

Dearest Trina, I beg to differ. There is one who does care for you. He knew you before you were born and he was the one who wove you into being. Jesus does care about you and wants all of His children to come to know Him personally. Praying for you, Ivy

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Mary Nagy 26 November 2005

I have a daughter your age and I really feel for you Trina! I'm glad you enjoy writing...you have a real talent for it. Sincerely, Mary

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Cj Heck 25 November 2005

A very sad poem, Trina. You have family here at Poemhunter. Keep writing, we'll keep reading. Take care, poet lady. Hugs to you, CJ

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