Alone Poem by Marilyn Shepperson

Alone

Rating: 5.0


We walked along together
Under the street lamps of the town
While a rainbow of neon lights
Were reflected in puddles on the ground
Grining self consciously, we tried to miss
All the cracks in the paving stones
Not hurrying to our desination
As we didn't really have one
Yet eventually we turned for home
But my compaions did not mind
After all, my friends were only my thoughts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

What can I say, but that I really admire this work of yours. Job well done! ! !

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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 September 2006

I see a solitary reaper of thoughts.Excellent write Marilyn!

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Scarlett Treat 28 September 2006

What a lovely thought - never to be alone. I like that comforting thought!

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