Viola Grey

Rookie - 0 Points (Feb '73 / NZ)

Alone - Poem by Viola Grey

Walking alone
through lifes rocky path
with nothing steady
to break my fall.
Broken on rocks
cutting the air,
bleeding on shores
never waning.
Crimson tide smiles
wash me away,
dragging my heart
into forever.

23/07/08


Comments about Alone by Viola Grey

  • Simon Collins Simon Collins (5/3/2012 3:39:00 AM)


    You are a real inspiration, clear and deep, awesome! (Report) Reply

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  • Bullion Grey (5/8/2009 8:37:00 PM)


    seems sad yet we all are dragged into the forever....could be, that last line a title for a novel? thank you for sharing....
    BG (Report) Reply

  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/27/2009 2:41:00 AM)


    Tis a sad poem but I really liked how the crimson tide smiles on you. Great imagery and writing as usual. Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Mark R Slaughter (4/16/2009 3:06:00 AM)


    Great pathos and melancholy in this poem Viola, heartfelt indeed.
    Hope it isn't true though!
    Mark (Report) Reply

  • *Trusting You* (11/29/2008 11:13:00 AM)


    this has great images for your reader... and I love your ending. this is writen very well. good job.
    Becca (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray Palas Kumar Ray (11/9/2008 4:28:00 AM)


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    Such is the walk of Life. A true image sincerely drawn.
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  • Ron Flowers (11/3/2008 7:30:00 PM)


    A hearfelt poem. I love it.

    Ron (Report) Reply

  • Heath Harrington (10/19/2008 12:29:00 AM)


    I think I'm on that rocky road right now. it flows so well.
    thx Heath (Report) Reply

  • Shimon Weinroth (9/14/2008 4:57:00 PM)


    poignant metaphors with much insight

    best wishes
    Shimon (Report) Reply

  • T Tango T Tango (8/24/2008 2:24:00 AM)


    Life consists of many a rocky road, as you have so nicely put.
    an excellent write.
    Tango. (Report) Reply

  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (8/6/2008 11:00:00 PM)


    touching poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Saint Cynosure Saint Cynosure (8/5/2008 2:02:00 PM)


    Hey super V this is excellent a 10 in mine and everyones book. (Report) Reply

  • Who Iam (8/4/2008 8:02:00 PM)


    sorrowfully the imagery of the tragedy we sometimes face in this 'world' of ours.
    Hopefully this was a passing thing and that healing has replaced the sadness.
    You have a talent dear lady.
    Well done.
    Ten Again! (Report) Reply

  • Courtney Carrots (8/4/2008 2:28:00 AM)


    i really do love this poem maybe you would like some of mine (Report) Reply

  • Tom Balch Tom Balch (8/1/2008 4:47:00 AM)


    Lovely simply lovely 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Brandon Dugan (7/31/2008 9:07:00 PM)


    wow i loved it very nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (7/27/2008 12:38:00 AM)


    yet it never rocks up the blue of oceanic sky
    trudging the walks even when alone
    smile still comes in its own waqy
    time when oscillates by the swing..................wonderful poem by the imagery, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Kris Smith (7/24/2008 3:33:00 AM)


    Forever is a big place attach a safety line 10 Paris (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 24, 2008



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