Alone Poem by JoDonna Lapahie

Alone

Rating: 5.0


Not alone
But I feel like that
Alone in the world
Thinking of all the memories that I can remember
Still feeling alone
Millions and millions of memories
Not one can change the way I feel
Thinking and thinking is all I can do
Alone maybe its only me
Turn away from problems
But their still my problems
I’m still feeling alone, thinking
and I don’t want help for my problems
GO AWAY
FADE AWAY

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gutter Box 25 November 2008

Great poem...I sometimes get these same feelings...but I get past it somehow Keep on writing.

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Elena Winters 24 November 2008

there's always a point in some ones life when we feel alone.....we may feel alone but we're not........loved your poem rate 10

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<font color =fusha>Amy 24 November 2008

fntastic poem you have great potential

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Aijaz Asif 12 November 2008

yes so true as if i was reading my own thoughts in this poem...its a wonderful write ma'am..thanks 10++

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Mark Jos'e 12 November 2008

nice one i like it thats how we feel sometimes and it leads to lonelyness.

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