Alone Poem by Ashleigh Stephenson

Alone

Rating: 5.0


I see you sitting there
Staying close to yourself
Not wanting anyone to come around you
When they do, you stare them down
Eyes telling them to go away
Everyone thinks you're wierd
Even though you're not
You just don't want anyone criticizing you
Telling you how to live your life
But when I got to know you
I understood why you act that way
You ask who this person is
It's me
In my mind and in my soul
But I never let anyone see how I feel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2006

You have expressed yourself well again Ashleigh, thankyou for sharing your art, love Duncan

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Allan James Saywell 19 April 2006

If a fish could talk, a fish that lived in a fish-bowl he would say, stop staring at me it makes me angry.for i need to be left alone so i can enjoy my beauty Allan James Saywell

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Geoffery Tarquin 12 April 2006

You put that feeling right in to me, it's amazing. It's exactly how i feel sometimes, and i keep it bottled too. This is an amzing poem, excellent.

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