Ocean Myranda


Alone - Poem by Ocean Myranda

A fallen angel found on the ground,
Her broken wings folded around her,
Her halo bent and broken,
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Comments about Alone by Ocean Myranda

  • Gold Star - 33,815 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/5/2014 10:24:00 PM)

    The angel's death is sorrowful and poem is neatly expressed the feeling. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Heather Wilkins (8/31/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    very emotional and painful write good read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ocean Myranda (9/7/2011 10:20:00 PM)

    Thank you to all of you! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 782 Points Indira Renganathan (10/13/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    A stray-death in the inhumane street....very well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 270 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/3/2009 1:46:00 AM)

    an imagery painted very emotional...it tells a lot of the pain and grief inside this lonely angelic death...good work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jean Dament (10/3/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    This sad poem expresses great emotion of pain & lonliness. Great job!
    I think we can all relate to this story at some time in our lives when we have felt truly alone. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem/story with us.

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  • Rookie Tharindu Atukorala (10/3/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    WOW! ! ! truly emotional! 10 +++++ (Report) Reply








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