Alone Poem by shakil ahmed
Alone
Alone, alone, alone
I was all alone
I was alone in my mother’s womb
I will be alone in my grave beneath the tomb
My life was a lone journey
There was none to accompany
She chose me as companion
I promised not to abandon
They say it was a heavenly knot,
Many battles of life together we fought
Suddenly a gushing wind blowing over the land
Swept her away who was my only friend
I was like a mate less dove
Wandering to and fro hankering love
Living in this mundane world
I love someone who is in another world
No man can give life to a dead one
It is only I who can make a dead alive
When in my couch I lie
She comes in my vision
She speaks, she loves, she atones…
I feel her love, touch her fragrant Jones,
I quench my thirst of hungry heart
With a girl who is fallen apart
For some times she remains alive
With a woeful heart my love I give
Again, I become alone when I awake
My lone journey again I take
In the midst of millions I become alone
It is fated that for no reasons I atone.
That is so sad but sweet and totally true. You are a good writer and i hope u keep writeing so well. Sincerly, Joker
This poem really touched me and I really like it as well. Alone is a feeling that haunts many across this cruel world. I give it a 10 and a favorite.
In the midst of millions I become alone It is fated that for no reasons I atone. ...beautifully expressed lines touched my heart....10....
I have to agree with the others a very touching read.I felt your words as you spoke them.Emotional read.
She comes in my vision She speaks, she loves, she atones… I feel her love, touch her fragrant Jones, I quench my thirst of hungry heart.....fascinating expression! An adorable piece of poetry! (10)
Shakil, you've done an excellent job with this heart-wrenching poem. You've captured the essence of aloneness VS loneliness. As a reader, I was able to sincerely feel your aloneness. Excellent write! Thank you for inviting me to your poetry page.
Very heart-touching poem on loneliness. You have described your lonely journey in a very smooth flow of words. Well-worded n well-conceived work.
Emotional poem loneliness a nightmare in life.keep on writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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very nice and touchy poem. hope you will get everything you wish for yourself. good luck and take care