(alone) Poem by Abby Keen Harris

(alone)

Rating: 2.8


im so alone somedays
i just cant stand it!
i just wish
that he was here
with me
but idk what 2 do
about it
maybe i have a
chance 2 never
be alone anymore
but even though
he's here in my heart
i feel alone all day long!
pain is all i feel
during the day
but in the nite
i feel so happy
take me and heal
feel me and tear
hear me and sigh
touch me and die
i cant hurt in the nite
but daytime im not alright
kiss me and break
give and dont take
shake but dont cry
be honest and try not 2 lie
hold them 2 their word
and maybe make a better world
taking everything away
now i want it 2 stay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

nicely written.. No loner seems to feel alright at daytime.. Keep writing, best wishes to ya :)

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Adam Reed 11 February 2010

i like it. pretty sweet poem =) . not too depressing but still stating something. not bad

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Joseph Poewhit 11 February 2010

Sad state to be in--

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