Cierrah Smiles

Alone - Poem by Cierrah Smiles

Walking down a large hallway using all my might to keep whats left of my eyes shielded from the rest of the world,
Listen to the talk and laughter wonder if their laughing at you,
You open your eyes cause you can't hold it any longer,
No laughter,
No comment for you feel so alone,
So blocked from the world,
Cause it can't let you in no matter your cry's,
1000s of people look at you and you don't feel so alone but crowded by people who couldn't care less,
You take a deep breath and take a couple step,
isn't so hard till you take another breath

Comments about Alone by Cierrah Smiles

  • Gold Star - 45,623 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (9/8/2014 11:58:00 PM)

    Loneliness and feeling alone in the world is a sad thing and here a beautiful poem and it is liked.. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Kay Staley (9/8/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    It reminds me of the book Skinny by Donna Cooner. If it rhymed it would be more powerful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/8/2014 10:53:00 AM)

    it is nature's great law to get used to the loneliness. at first we may feel the loneliness and then it will become the part of our 'normal' life.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,039 Points Chinedu Dike (9/8/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Nice poem. The greatest crime against fellow man is neither HATE nor LOVE but an attitude of INDIFFERENCE. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,371 Points Bernard Snyder (9/8/2014 2:00:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Sometimes, being alone gives us a better perspective about life! Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/8/2014 1:35:00 AM)

    Loneliness perfectly expressed. Congratulations it being selected as poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (9/8/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    You are never alone if you stand by yourself (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,414 Points Leslie Philibert (9/8/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    A very brillant poem, written in perfect English... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/22/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    a good write. expressing loneliness. enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 49 Points Anita Sehgal (9/8/2012 2:21:00 AM)

    alone and lonely in a crowd... great share (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,721 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (8/10/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    Loaded with lonliness. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Joe Foster (5/13/2012 12:12:00 AM)

    Thats deep. nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 165 Points Romeo Della Valle (12/16/2011 6:11:00 PM)

    Amazing! A deep and thought provoking write that clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! In order to enhance this poetic talent you must continue writing and reading other poets works so you can really develop that great potential! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, April 9, 2012

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