Bronze Star - 6,475 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

alone! ! !

It emptied before my arrival
In the womb silence was the vibe
There in the fluid my glimpses sank
There at birth my cries accompanied me
At the time of the fall blood was the companion
My skin swathe the reflexes of its pain
When my heart mourn at the shadows
My brain taught to be realistic
When all was asleep in the midnight
My dreams mend all my losses
There all part in my life path
But at the next dawn they all amended
My loneliness converse to my whisper
They together mend my prospects
When my journey started to eternity
Still in that path my loneliness accompanied'
All the way I am a loner in my love life
Alone as bee in the garden of roses
It's splendid if I get some honey in the voyage
Otherwise the bitterness of the pesticide
I am a loner need to suffocate
But it's common for all that
All are alone someway! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Friday, July 25, 2014

Topic of this poem: loneliness

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (alone! ! ! by SALINI NAIR )

  • Bronze Star - 6,611 Points Amitava Sur (7/29/2014 6:52:00 AM)

    Yes some way or other we all are alone at last. Liked the way you expressed the intensity of it. Thank you Salini for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,206 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/29/2014 12:07:00 AM)

    Man is born free and lonely and loneliness is the reality and the poem is beautiful and enjoyed as a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,237 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/25/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    Yes loneliness is our companion from the day we are conceived till the day of departure from this world.........
    very nicely composed....................... (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. The Rose that Grew from Concrete, Tupac Shakur
  6. If, Rudyard Kipling
  7. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep, Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
[Hata Bildir]