Bronze Star - 5,739 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

alone! ! !

It emptied before my arrival
In the womb silence was the vibe
There in the fluid my glimpses sank
There at birth my cries accompanied me
At the time of the fall blood was the companion
My skin swathe the reflexes of its pain
When my heart mourn at the shadows
My brain taught to be realistic
When all was asleep in the midnight
My dreams mend all my losses
There all part in my life path
But at the next dawn they all amended
My loneliness converse to my whisper
They together mend my prospects
When my journey started to eternity
Still in that path my loneliness accompanied'
All the way I am a loner in my love life
Alone as bee in the garden of roses
It's splendid if I get some honey in the voyage
Otherwise the bitterness of the pesticide
I am a loner need to suffocate
But it's common for all that
All are alone someway! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Friday, July 25, 2014

Topic of this poem: loneliness

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  • Bronze Star - 5,755 Points Amitava Sur (7/29/2014 6:52:00 AM)

    Yes some way or other we all are alone at last. Liked the way you expressed the intensity of it. Thank you Salini for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,121 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/25/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    Yes loneliness is our companion from the day we are conceived till the day of departure from this world.........
    very nicely composed....................... (Report) Reply

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