Lucy Lae


Alone Again - Poem by Lucy Lae

I feel so worn out
I'm so alone
I know that my circumstances don't condone my actions
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Comments about Alone Again by Lucy Lae

  • Rookie - 264 Points John S (8/29/2014 2:10:00 PM)

    Deep, sad poem. Interesting, subtle rhyming scheme that I really like. It's not an obvious rhyming scheme like most poems. I've always thought using textbook poetic devices like rhyming help a poem flow and roll off the tongue easier. It also makes them more aesthically pleasing. When I first read this poem, I realized it was rhyming, but waen't completely obvious where. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,839 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/21/2014 10:25:00 PM)

    A very impressive and heart touching poem
    I never believed in you but god save me
    or slay me but do not leave me here
    alone again.
    These lines show you are a believer, sometimes we complain God but have no alternate but to ask Him to cure our sickness and to heal our wounds. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,213 Points Lyn Paul (8/21/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    Dear Lucy, How I thank you for your words. AS this was written in 2012 I would really like to know how you are going now. I too like Kelly could really feel your emotion. May you be seeing light in this new day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (8/21/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    ...........depression strikes many people....the poet was courageous to write such a poem....congratulations on member poem of the day... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,744 Points Bernard Snyder (8/21/2014 12:39:00 AM)

    This is a dark poem. Yet, it was very well-written. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,613 Points Savita Tyagi (8/21/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    pain of lonely ness expressed so well. Dark side of mind inflicting pain upon itself against the better judgement of faith and reasoning. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (8/21/2012 1:07:00 PM)

    So dark a dark space that this takes one too and i think most of us visit there once or twice but eventually when least expected the sun does shine again, i found it really interesting you chose cloud four, obviously not even half way to cloud nine, where oh where did the nine originate and how significant does that make your chosen figure. The release of internal pain by external inflicted wounds is one i do understand but wish i didnt... i so hope you come out the other side soon, i really do...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (8/21/2012 11:11:00 AM)

    EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN, a voice from the inner dark side of existence, isolation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Francisca Darko (8/21/2012 5:06:00 AM)

    I can almost feel your pain through your words. So powerful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/17/2012 10:13:00 PM)

    Your words Lucy, bring out such emotion in me, to be affected by someones else's words, I have felt this feeling before, and it like living hell, not knowing where to go, who to turn to, and yes, death is almost more attractive... but if you read my write, called - Silent Scream, and Climbing out of the abyss... and The Ghost Within Me... you'll know I speak the truth, and I understand. Blah, Blah, Blah... sorry for rambling on, This is a Deep, Heartfelt Write, and You have penned your emotions on this note... for all to see. Very Brave, and Such a Great Write.
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points eloida Capuno (5/22/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    pain expressed at its best i can almost feel it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alok Mishra (5/6/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    A sentimental tone! What a genuinely drawn expression! Beautiful, though the feeling you are drawing is so saddening! Being alone in this world of...... is so heavy! (Report) Reply










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