Ruby Mostazir

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Alone In A Million Crowd? - Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Sometimes i feel so alone in a million crowd
Sometimes i feel so empty inside
On da road;
In da crowd;
Suddenly i find myself alone..like a big cloudy sky
Then i feel to cry
Tear drop rolling down on my face,
I tried to ran away 4m da crowd!
I tried to ran away 4m all my pain!
But your face like a ocean of grief...
Take me down
Drop me inside;
Thousand i tried to forget you,
I tried to close my eyes,
Your word whispers in my ear's
Baby i can't live widout you
I will surely die....
When even i know dat; Its all over
da way we broke each others heart and said goodbye? ? ?


Comments about Alone In A Million Crowd? by Ruby Mostazir

  • Silver Star - 3,308 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/14/2013 9:24:00 PM)

    Swimming in the sea of sadness yet a significant solo of loneliness! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,929 Points Heather Wilkins (10/2/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    we all have these feelings from time to time. but all is not lost. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/2/2013 1:19:00 AM)

    Its like confession with high degree of commotion but in spite of negativity the positiveness -immensity thank a lot its a philosophical poem 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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