Alone In The Dark Poem by Lisa Bray

Alone In The Dark

Rating: 5.0


im here in this dark room wishing you were here and that i could hold you in my arms.
i want to feel the heat off of your body.
i want to feel the touch of your hand.
i want to know you fears and you deepest secrets.
but here i am alone in this dark room.
with the memoerys you left with me on that cold night on st.avn.
the words we spoke was words of the pain.
the looks we sheard was a call for help.
you held me close one time before you left that night.
but we both knew deep down it would only be the last.
for your famliy didnt want you around me.
and my family didnt want me around you.
but my wish on my sexteenth birthday was...
that i could have you in my arms.
so tonight i wright and with god i hope.
that i can close my eyes and wake up to your sweet smile.
in the risen sun shine.



to some one i love even if they dont know it yet: ]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

good dear..so lovely..i can see myself in you and my love in yours. God bless you and your love Lisa. take care..

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Afzal Shauq 02 August 2009

so tonight i wright and with god i hope. that i can close my eyes and wake up to your sweet smile. in the risen sun shine. darkness, lonliness and smiles..what a sweet indicators interrelating to each other.. like it..lte me share one of my famous say with you in this reagrad..hope you like it..(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq) means the idea of your poem here is different but our destination for getting smiles is same same..well done..10/10

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Antonio Liao 08 July 2009

loom night in the dark....a lone and lonely...pour out the emotion of fading light with tears dried in thew cheek..... the power faith move each solitaire to grow in the midst of uncertainty...just a single hope rebirth the power of you and my heart salute of your strength...my vow of joy in your soul....a great master piece of your poem....that move the whole world thank you and God bless....10 ++++++

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Sanjib Das 05 July 2009

wowwwwwwwww, Lisa you write so well i can't imagine, ok, keep it up.

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Christopher Flynn 05 July 2009

You have an ability to use imagery and emotion to paint a picture of love. I would work on your spelling as it will help with your long term sucess as a writer. Best of luck

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Lisa Bray

Lisa Bray

indiana, Indianapolis
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