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Alone On Sea - Poem by Allenika ...

Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
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  • Brian Jani (5/13/2014 12:29:00 PM)


    Allenika Amazing poetic skills here (Report) Reply

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  • (9/17/2013 1:32:00 PM)


    love poem..i feel sincerity with it...sea..alone...i live near the sea..nice feeling (Report) Reply

  • (7/28/2013 3:53:00 PM)


    Alone I will walk
    on my last mile....
    nicely written it reminded me of a movie of Tom Hanks....
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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (5/1/2013 7:04:00 AM)


    A song on/of solitude. (Report) Reply

  • Emily Slm (12/16/2012 2:55:00 PM)


    This poem reminds me of the movie; The Life Of Pi (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2012 10:38:00 AM)


    Alone, yes, alone reveals the Truth (Report) Reply

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  • Ledumetse Bakoko (5/17/2012 12:28:00 PM)


    really love this poem (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2012 8:04:00 PM)


    I loved this poem it reminds me of a time my friends and I were stuck in Nantucket Sound when we were too young to be out on a sailboat by ourselves. Theres some great original poetry on this website as well http: //www.sharingpoetry.com/ (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Ddjebarni (3/24/2012 3:05:00 PM)


    waaaaaw amazing words i love it (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Ddjebarni (3/24/2012 3:04:00 PM)


    waaaaw amazing words i realy love it (Report) Reply

  • Hanyani Ngobeni (2/16/2012 7:34:00 AM)


    alove it, its alsome, fantastic, ecstatic, manufic......alone.........alone indeed. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)


    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :)
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  • (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)


    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :)
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  • (8/22/2011 10:47:00 PM)


    Well,
    xplaning my situation right now
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  • (8/27/2009 12:36:00 PM)


    Well, it sounds like a song. Well done. Konstantin. (Report) Reply

  • (8/26/2009 3:23:00 PM)


    beautiful I am not familiar with this mans story and because of you I will (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2009 6:59:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem with a flow like a song...with surprise in the end..well engraved into experience of survival and loneliness. thanks for sharing!
    Yelena M.
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  • (8/7/2009 7:08:00 AM)


    that was so great and so meaningful. let it be keep it! i feel like the poem some time. U are doing well (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/22/2009 3:46:00 AM)


    wonderful piece of poignace life when reeked by lone pain holding the last end of sraw drownig, yet tear gleans slowly in the eyes as embracing the death slowly in the midst of sea, the eloquience ingenious by the imagery, wellpenned,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply










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