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Alone on Sea


Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
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  • Rookie Negarin 1401 (9/17/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    love poem..i feel sincerity with it...sea..alone...i live near the sea..nice feeling (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (7/28/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    Alone I will walk
    on my last mile....
    nicely written it reminded me of a movie of Tom Hanks.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kevin Russell (4/12/2012 8:04:00 PM)

    I loved this poem it reminds me of a time my friends and I were stuck in Nantucket Sound when we were too young to be out on a sailboat by ourselves. Theres some great original poetry on this website as well http: //www.sharingpoetry.com/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (8/24/2009 6:59:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with a flow like a song...with surprise in the end..well engraved into experience of survival and loneliness. thanks for sharing!
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zogam Mi (8/7/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    that was so great and so meaningful. let it be keep it! i feel like the poem some time. U are doing well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (1/22/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    wonderful piece of poignace life when reeked by lone pain holding the last end of sraw drownig, yet tear gleans slowly in the eyes as embracing the death slowly in the midst of sea, the eloquience ingenious by the imagery, wellpenned,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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